Here's a little story I wrote a year or so ago. I'm trying to launch a career in writing AND now I am letting my big secret out to all of you, my loyal blog readers. I want some feedback on this one. This is intended to be a bedtime story for youngest readers or better described as youngest listeners:). It has been reviewed by editors, but no one is biting the line. Let me know your thoughts and/or edits. Maybe you can help me get this to print.
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SWEET DREAMS SWEET DREAMER
Thanks for the feedback on this story. I removed it because I am so encouraged by your encouragement that I am going to continue to submit it for publication and don't want it online before it has my name attached to it in print:). If you want to read it though and missed it while it was posted just email me and I would be happy to send you a copy.
Tuesday, October 17, 2006
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Yo! Its your bro!
I had no idea that you were so fluid with language. That shows some real potential! It is difficult to write something simple with such fluid prose (trust me, I know, I try to write pop songs for a hobby). There is such a beauty in that. Nice work!
I like it... a lot! I want it in print so I can read it to my kids. As I reading I was picturing all kinds of great illustrations. Keep writing. Keep trying to get it published. Keep going.
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